Peer Review by Viviana Redondo (United States of America)()

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to cherish

By: ♛DaBolo♛



                    spicy
      tasty
                                                          filled with a lot of sauce,
                        not a family recipe,
   but it will soon become a recipe to cherish,
forever.

                                cause my recipes are always like a brand new world inside your mouth.

I did a lowercase poem for some reason. I hope you like it. Also I am writing a novel and haven't been writing recently on WTW. I am working on some other BTS stuff, so soon I should have some more writing. Also I don't know how I formatted this, but I think you guys will like it.

Peer Review

What interests me most about this piece is the line spacing and the words used to describe the food.


What food are you describing in the beginning?


Reviewer Comments

I would say to give a little bit more context to the first part of the poem but the ending sentence is really good.