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Hi! I've worked REALLY hard on this story, but I published all of it in 1 entry and no one read it. I think it will be better if I do it in pieces, so this is the prologue! Your likes means more to come of this story, so remember to like!
I was so surprised how it just went into mer-people like that, it's really cool.
I would like to know more about the underwater life, that sort really interests me, but it'll probably come in more along the way.
AWESOME I love anything with water, especially underwater! also i think it's cool that it has that realistic modernish touch in it.
:D XD =D