intoxicating starlight

United States

Nickname: Waspy
female
christian
in love with love
cats * art * wind * stars * love poetry
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Message to Readers

Please give me any and all feedback. Reviews would also be greatly appreciated. What lines are your favorite?

&imstilltryingtosay h e l l o.

September 19, 2019

FREE WRITING

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 i.    oh darling boy 

You are all softness, all caress and winks and shared grins,
And I am all softness, all stillness and snowflakes and flushed cheeks.

But you are also sharpness, all whiteness and thunder and unawaiting silence,
And I am also sharpness, all tempest and teeth and strangled screams.

ii.   are ladybugs more worth your gaze than i?

You are all soundless, all effortless and darlings and fluttered waves,
And I am all soundless, all breathless and butterflies and skirting glances

But you are also loudness, all clueless and shipwreck and shouting eye-contact,
And I am also loudness, all overprocess and panic and avoidant poison.

iii.   oh darling boy 

You are all sweetness, all looseness and uplift and sugared smiles,
And I am all sweetness, all closeness and sunscreen and citrus laughter.

But you are also bitterness, all brokenness and crossfire and recoiled aftertaste.
And I am also bitterness, all crookedness and casualty and shackled tongue.

 iv.    and this unrequited everything is so very familiar.

 
~&imstilltryingtosay h e l l o.

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5 Comments
  • RemovedUser1

    Wow, this is great. I love how you contrast by comparing.


    4 months ago
  • happy butterfly

    wow you're so talented.im so happy i found you,your work is so powerful with emotion and so beautiful.
    also your username is so cool,so much prettier than mine lol


    4 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    Such an amazing, emotional piece! I absolutely love this! I dont have words <3


    4 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    I'm astounded by your talent and heartbroken by the date of this piece, because it means you post rarely. But some of the best things are rare and fleeting.


    5 months ago
  • mossmachinery

    your work is stunning! it is whimsical and surreal and impactful in a certain way that most whimsical surreal impactful things are not. hard to believe that you don't have more followers. i encourage you to post more!


    11 months ago