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Hi! I thought this would be cute, because we've all had those crushes that never worked out! Please don't tease my work, I am just a writer trying to get better!
There is a really cool ring to it! The rhyme, I can literally see myself there in the action. Your description is amazing!
Maybe elaborate on the characters? Yes, I do like the current detail, but more would be awesome! Just a thought.
Thank you for writing this piece, I thoroughly enjoyed reading and reviewing it! I hope you find my feedback useful, but do remember its only my opinion, some parts of where I believe could be improved, you may disagree with it and that’s totally fine!