Peer Review by j.baustian (United States)

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17

By: dreisch98


PROMPT: [Insert Age]

    When I was younger all I could think about was what life would be like when I was older.  Now once i'm to this age I have satisfied by how far I have come. Now all I can think about is what is to come in the future. That's what stinks about aging, you always look forward to the future and you never live your life in the present. Once I have plans figured out I always seem to try and find new ones to improve the old ones. Throughout my life so far I could never settle for anything. I hope as my life progresses I can learn to settle down and to never want more. Being 17 has a lot of meaning but not as much meaning as whats to come.


Peer Review

That's what stinks about aging, you always look forward to the future and you never live your life in the present.


He has a good point about always wanting more. Add what you like about being 17.


Reviewer Comments

read over your writing before publishing