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Eyes

By: Ibex


You can see it in their eyes--the whispers of sorrow, the dreams of hope, the scars of pain, the melodies of love, the language of life.


Peer Review

Well said. You've taken the age-old 'eyes are the window to the soul' concept and stretched it out, giving it your own meaning. The meaning I take from your words is that someone's eyes give way to the universal language, which is the language of emotions.


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