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Message to Readers
Any help on editing this is appreciated. I now I am over the word count so let me know anything that you think isn't central to the story and could be taken out.
I love this piece, I just love it so much. I love your introduction and description of your relationship with Ms.C. . There are so many elements in this story that I understand and I love how you presented the events and connection within the piece.
I related most to your experience with your teacher. Having that one person who just changed you.
Your writing style helps to build the urgency of the piece,it kept me reading and interested in the whole piece. Your description of the events as a whole is superb.
I think you were describing the huge difference one connection you make with a person can change your life.
Check for little errors and if you like how your piece flows.
THANKS FOR SHOWING HOW AWESOME TEACHERS CAN BE.