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What did you think of my writing?
I think it's great how this story is so personal and honest. You have a lot of detail and many people could relate to it easily.
I can relate because I also have a brother who's about two years older than me, and sometimes it can be tough to get along.
I think that you could separate your writing into paragraphs to make it easier to read, and maybe improve the structure of some of your sentences. Your voice is very present throughout the whole thing which is great, but it could be a bit more clear.
I love your point that human connections can be messy and complex. We all have our own struggles within relationships with each other, and this is a big part of human nature.
This is a really good draft, and you should be proud of it. :)