loveletterstosappho

United States of America

writer of stories, lover of girls

nuclear fusion

September 12, 2019

FREE WRITING

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and she is so close i can see the clumps of mascara on individual lashes, long and thin, and i have not seen her in so long it feels a little bit like falling in love with a stranger, except maybe i have loved this stranger since the beginning of time, since the creation of the universe, since gravity and supernovas and space dust, since hydrogen and helium burning burning burning and the birth of earth's oceans, since my first breath of salty air; inhale sodium chloride, exhale into her hair--bleached blonde again, though it was once peach and before that rose gold and before that purple and before that red and before that green and i think she has gone through all the colors of the rainbow so it would be pointless to list them all and i think red is my favorite color on her because it reminds me of fire, of how easily i could burn on her skin, fire like alcohol like hydrogen and helium burning and burning and burning and i am ablaze and she is swallowing my smoke like she needs it, maybe because she does, maybe because we need each other and i set her on fire and swallow her smoke and the universe rejoices and we combust; a supernova. 
written about my best friend because i miss her a lot

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14 Comments
  • ajamwal ꒰•̹͡ິु•ິू꒱

    hello @loveletterstosappho, just wanted to let you know october wtw highlights will be up sometime tomorrow! (hosted by @Anha)


    26 days ago
  • Kahte

    This is so beautiful!


    29 days ago
  • Sabine of the Galaxy

    I submitted a peer review for this.


    about 2 months ago
  • Anha

    september highlights have gone live!
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/126762/version/252617


    about 2 months ago
  • caityege

    THIS IS AMAZINGGG!! I love it so much, such a beautiful piece it is written so well!
    BTW I have submitted a peer review on this. You have done such a fantastic job!


    2 months ago
  • rainandsonder

    fantastic work! i love the sort of rambling, run-on style, like a list but not; it sort of highlights everything you're trying to say here.


    2 months ago
  • and-peggy

    I love this so much!! Especially the way it leads up to the ending- really great technique. Also, thank you so much for your comment on my piece. I will definitely go write it from Elle's perspective now, hope you will come check it out when it is done! :)


    2 months ago
  • Ruthh

    I don’t know how I haven’t seen this piece before,,, wow, what a goddess of writing you are!!! The descriptions are so poetic and sensual it’s just wow ‘it reminds me of fire, of how easily I could burn on her skin’ is so beautiful I had to re-read it because I was like :0 !!!! Love it


    2 months ago
  • r|A|i|N

    hi! thank you for expressing interest in my contest. there are only five days left to enter, so get your piece in while you still can! contest found here:
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/124092/version/242373


    3 months ago
  • r|A|i|N

    your writing never fails to impress. this is so passionate; it feels frantic and crazed, too, in a way that heightens its sense of love and devotion. i love that you made it a run-on sentence for this reason. great work.


    3 months ago
  • chiaroscuro

    This is beautiful! I adore the tone you set by making it a single sentence, and your space-themed descriptions are absolutely stunning.


    3 months ago
  • Anha

    woah, this was so empassioned i barely realised it was a run-on sentence. your writing is phenomenal; this is unbelievable.


    3 months ago
  • --RosieOnTheRun (from reality)--

    this is amazing i love it


    3 months ago
  • Ursa

    Amazing as always.


    3 months ago