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I don't possess enough words to explain how this moved me. This was beautiful! You made me feel what Amalie felt. And for that I say 'well done!'
I gave you a few questions at the last highlighted sentence. There's a lot I want to know, but ... this piece is too sacred and sweet to add to anymore.
Pardon me while I stumble around for a kleenex ..... I'm not crying, my allergies just get really bad this time of year.....
Needless to say, this was absolutely beautiful! Way more people need to read this. Thank you for giving me the honor of reading/reviewing your wonderful work of art.
Keep on! God bless!