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fifteen

By: ellie s


PROMPT: [Insert Age]

fifteen is an in-between age. you're not quite old enough to make big desicions on your own, yet expected to take responsibility for them.
when i turned fifteen i dreamed about all the adventures i was yet to have and stories that were going to become a part of me. it seemed that being this age was something i had unknowkingly longed for. it isn't everything i desired yet, but i am sure it will all settle into me, as every other year did. my past few years i spent dreaming about the life i would like to live, waiting for something to come find me. on my fifteenth year, i decided to leave that idea behind.


Peer Review

fifteen is an in-between age. you're not quite old enough to make big desicions on your own, yet expected to take responsibility for them.
when i turned fifteen i dreamed about all the adventures i was yet to have and stories that were going to become a part of me. it seemed that being this age was something i had unknowkingly longed for. it isn't everything i desired yet, but i am sure it will all settle into me, as every other year did. my past few years i spent dreaming about the life i would like to live, waiting for something to come find me. on my fifteenth year, i decided to leave that idea behind.


Explain more about your childhood and what you learned from the past.


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