parachutes_the_idiot

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i would’ve given you the clothes off my back, the air from my lungs, the remnants of my heart. but apparently i wasnt good enough. ive never been good enough for your love.

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The Editing Monster

October 1, 2019

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Need advice on your writing? Tired of waiting for a Peer Review?? THEN your in the right place!!!!!!! Comment below with the name of your piece, and i'll work my magic fer ya!!!!!!!! This is a free service.

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84 Comments
  • Koda Lynn

    could you review my piece ' I tried'


    9 months ago
  • Aurora Borealis_03

    Please review any one of my pieces. This is soooooo awesome of you. Thanks!!!


    9 months ago
  • V-Rose

    Hey. If you could review and give any advice on anything of mine I would be sooo grateful.


    9 months ago
  • luluwrites111

    Literally anything, but maybe a longer one like the red tent or matzo meal miracles. Pretty far down tho so if anything else catches your eye review the rainbows outta that thing. love ya for this :)


    9 months ago
  • Deleted User

    I'm late. I know it XD

    I published four chapters of an almost completed book I'm writing. I will warn you now, the subject can be touchy. If you are sensitive about abuse or family issues, I would not recommend reading :/

    Here's the link to the first chapter. You decide if you want to continue from there.

    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/130711/version/251075


    9 months ago
  • Samina

    Thank you so much for reviewing people's work. It is very good job and free of service. It is great of you. I dont want reviews but i wish you to ask me any thing in my latest session of Q and A. Thk u so much :-)


    9 months ago
  • Flowing Ink

    Any of my work, if you would mot mind. I just need the feedback!


    10 months ago
  • ajamwal

    oh, i am so sorry i missed it, i found the 5 chapters' review, SUPER SORRY, and the other one yeah i don't think it has been shared yet, instead could you just review... hmm...hmm... i don't think i need any right NOW, but thanks!!


    10 months ago
  • Blotted

    Of Ash and Elm
    Thanks!


    10 months ago
  • bambiamby

    Any of my work if you wouldn’t mind. (everything is better when their free :p)


    10 months ago
  • pretzel_time

    My piece is called "The Battle within Closed Doors: Part 1" (TW for abuse)


    10 months ago
  • parachutes_the_idiot

    @AJ-Izzy Your reviews done!


    10 months ago
  • parachutes_the_idiot

    Ahahaha! I’ve almost caught up! More requests please, I’d love to keep this going for a long time!


    10 months ago
  • pretzel_time

    It would mean a lot if you could review this pupper: https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/free_writing/129583


    10 months ago
  • parachutes_the_idiot

    @aceoftriangles consider my wisdom sprinkled upon your pieces! I adore them!


    10 months ago
  • parachutes_the_idiot

    @Artburger, my autocorrect wants to call you fartburger so bad lol! Anyways, your review is done!


    10 months ago
  • parachutes_the_idiot

    @Asenath RoseYour review is done! But you'll have to wait to see which piece I reviewed....... it's a secret lol, that's what you get for letting me pick!


    10 months ago
  • >_the stranger_<

    Could you review my piece "Sleep Paralysis"


    10 months ago
  • parachutes_the_idiot

    @thelumosduck Your piece is all done!


    10 months ago
  • parachutes_the_idiot

    @caityege your piece has been reviewed!


    10 months ago
  • Kepler

    Perhaps review my piece Colors of Life?


    10 months ago
  • weirdo

    wow until january? that's a long time. i'd love a review on "the new asteria" but if that's too long then any piece will do. thank you! i am so grateful!


    10 months ago
  • Victoria Martin

    Heyyy Parachutes,
    I just read your review on my piece The Four and 1 White Walls. Thank you sosoosososo much, I really needed someone to remind me that my goal of being a writer is not invalid, and still extremely feasible. To answer your question on where this story takes place, it was actually my room....lots of white walls and carpeting. I will try to add or publish another piece like this. Thank you again for the review and support.


    10 months ago
  • V-Rose

    Hey. I would be so grateful if you would review anything of mine. Thanks!!!!!!


    10 months ago
  • jeily

    wow, this is super generous!! if you could, could you review one of the two poems I've published? Although to be fair, you can pick which piece you want to review, anything is super helpful :) thank you so much!


    10 months ago
  • AJ - Izzy

    Woah, you're so nice!!! This is awesome, but if you don't get to do a review on this piece, it is totally fine... just by offering you're awesome! :DD
    If you could, I have a piece called Burning Red Flower which needs desperate advice... thank you so much! (I'll include the link too)
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/81/shared/122896/version/235552


    10 months ago
  • parachutes_the_idiot

    Everyone else, I’ll get to your reviews soon! Still open for business, just have some patience! XØ, parachutes


    10 months ago
  • parachutes_the_idiot

    @Bookworm 101 Your review has been composed and sent!


    10 months ago
  • parachutes_the_idiot

    s:) Your piece is amazing! Thanks for letting me review it!


    10 months ago
  • parachutes_the_idiot

    @ajamwal I edited your first 5 chapters a while back, and I edited another piece of yours as well, but it hasn’t processed yet.......Also, I can’t remember the name of it, so if you do t get it within a week, message me, and I’ll do another one for you!


    10 months ago
  • ajamwal

    Hey @parachutes, maybe you accidentally skipped me, but i'm still open for a review on any of my pieces.


    10 months ago
  • parachutes_the_idiot

    @Jasmine Savage Your review has been submitted


    10 months ago
  • parachutes_the_idiot

    @EmTheCoolOne your piece is ready!


    10 months ago
  • parachutes_the_idiot

    @amohn04 I reviewed your mashup for you, as you said I could pick!


    10 months ago
  • parachutes_the_idiot

    @Victoria Martin Your piece has been reviewed!


    10 months ago
  • parachutes_the_idiot

    @ Just A Dream Your reviews have been sent! Thanks for the patience!


    10 months ago
  • Blotted

    Oof. A lot of people already. I have a contrasting dialogue piece here: https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/117463/version/226018
    Thanks.


    10 months ago
  • aceoftriangles

    Hey parachutes! I would much appreciate it if you sprinkled your wisdom upon my poems, Fire and Flame and Her (which is published in Poets and Wordsmiths).


    10 months ago
  • rosemarywisdom

    Regarding your comment on my piece "california dreamin'"... you have no idea how long I've waited for someone to ask that XD

    Let's just say it's a release date for something important to me.


    10 months ago
  • Artburger

    Hey, if you're not too busy, would you be able to review my piece "Silence" at https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/129168/version/248298
    that would be great (and you know, if you get bored there's always other stuff on my profile). I get that's you're probably very busy so take your time and good job on starting something like this. It sounds great! Thank you!


    10 months ago
  • A Rose

    If you could review any of my pieces, that would be amazing. this is such a cool idea


    10 months ago
  • thelumosduck

    If you have time to review my piece “The River of Life” I’d really appreciate it!


    10 months ago
  • Deleted User

    g'day parachutes!!
    Would you be able to give me a review of The Girls Fight: https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/127680/version/245529
    Thanks :)


    10 months ago
  • Bookworm101

    Hey! If you've got the time, could you please review Sticks and Stones May Break Your Bones.
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/127606/version/245491
    Thanks @parachutes !


    10 months ago
  • Mary Wall

    Thanks for supporting the community! I won't make you any more busy than you obviously are. :)


    10 months ago
  • s:)

    hey! i can see that you seem really busy, but if u ever have the time i would love it if you could review my piece called "rainbow love". there are two versions of it but the most recent one is the one you should look at. thank u so much and this is so kind of u to do :)


    10 months ago
  • parachutes_the_idiot

    Still running this! My reviews are pretty great @r|A|i|N, And I’d love to review that piece for you <3


    10 months ago
  • r|A|i|N

    i realize i'm kind of late to responding, but if you're still taking pieces, i would love a review on "siren song"
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/126443/version/244571
    but i only really want my piece reviewed if you can provide me with detailed feedback. i don't see much point to reviews that have one-sentence answers to questions and no highlights.
    thanks for doing this


    10 months ago
  • mason wong

    Thank you so much too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    10 months ago
  • mason wong

    @parachutes Ok the name of the piece I want you to review is
    Construed response for analyzing and contrasting Old Major's speech, and Martin Luther King Jr By Mason Wong
    Analyize Old Major's speech by Mason Wong
    essay on how to eat healthy and not develop a eating disorder by Mason Wong
    Journal entry on what is vaccines and why it is important. By mason Wong
    Journal entry by Mason Wong
    climate description for tropical rain forest by Mason Wong
    Ecological issue facing tropical rain forest ( Amazon rainforest) By Mason Wong


    10 months ago
  • hero2a11

    @parachutes, thanks a ton for your feedback! I'm glad you liked my writing, and don't worry, part 2 of Fimbulwinter is in the works :)


    10 months ago
  • Quille's Dead Account

    @parachutes, thank you! :)


    10 months ago
  • Jasmine Savage

    Mine is a christmas story for my a-level course work but it hasn't got a proper title yet.


    10 months ago
  • Emzie

    This is amazing! Is it ok if you could review "Narrative without people"? Thank you!!


    10 months ago
  • parachutes_the_idiot

    More reviews to come in a bit!


    10 months ago
  • parachutes_the_idiot

    @Take7 I reviewed the piece you have, and can’t wait to see more from you!


    10 months ago
  • parachutes_the_idiot

    @Harlow!!!!!!!! Hey you! I reviewed 2 of your pieces, and omg, I love them so much! Im glad we got paired up this month, and I hope that you find my reviews to be insightful. Your poetry is beautiful.


    10 months ago
  • parachutes_the_idiot

    @rainandsonder Great short pieces, and I had a fun time reading and reviewing them. You are a greatwordsmith, and I hope you appreciate my feedback and can use it to better your work!


    10 months ago
  • parachutes_the_idiot

    @Julianna what are the piece names? I can’t get the links to work for me, but I’d gladly review your work if you can tell me the name (:


    10 months ago
  • parachutes_the_idiot

    @BurningMidnightOil your reviews are done, and I hope you can take what i said constructively! You are a great writer, and I hope my advice is well received!


    10 months ago
  • parachutes_the_idiot

    @Anha, your reviews are done, and I’m particularly fond of them! You have a way of creating such flows sentences that is truly magical


    10 months ago
  • parachutes_the_idiot

    @Pineapples I’ve reviewed your 2 pieces, and had a pleasejre doing so. Your commentary is so sarcastically wonderful, and more than once I felt as though you had stepped into my mind


    10 months ago
  • parachutes_the_idiot

    @New York_dreamer I’ve reviewed all 4 of your songs, and cried for 3/4 of them. Your work is beautiful, and let me know if you’d like to collaborate sometime, as I’m a pretty good composer/pianist.


    10 months ago
  • amohn04

    Thank you so much for offering to do this!!! I can't decide which piece I'd like you to look over, so could you pick your favorite out of mine? I don't have many but I'm working on a few right now, and your feedback will help me improve them. Again, thank you so much!!!


    10 months ago
  • parachutes_the_idiot

    @mason wong hey dude, I can’t get the links to work. Please send me the Names of the pieces you’d like me to review, amd I’ll get on that ASAP!


    10 months ago
  • parachutes_the_idiot

    @hero2a11 your pieces are reviewed! Thanks for letting me read them, they are FANTASTIC!


    10 months ago
  • Victoria Martin

    Amazing offer, it is quite the undertaking. Could you review my piece The Four and One White Walls?Thank you for making this a thing :)


    10 months ago
  • parachutes_the_idiot

    Hey lovelies! I’ve started reviewing, so keep the requests coming! I’ll post again once I have some ready to send you all!

    -P


    10 months ago
  • The Moving Finger Writes

    Thanks so much for the offer. If you could review “The Windswept Girl With The Flowered Backpack” and “Ride The Second Wave” that’d be lovely.


    10 months ago
  • ajamwal

    thank you @parachutes, can you give me feedback on my novel's first 5 chapters, they are all on one published piece. And another piece of your choice, I would really appreciate it!! Also, once you decide which piece you want to give feedback on, can you comment that this is the piece you are going to choose so I don't edit or publish it, thanks!!


    10 months ago
  • Emzie

    this sounds great!!


    10 months ago
  • Quille's Dead Account

    This is pretty cool :D


    10 months ago
  • Arkham

    Hey, I would love some feedback, if you have the time)


    10 months ago
  • Harlow

    Hi I’m your partner for the reviewers club. I wasn’t sure how this would work, but if you haven’t already I was wondering if you could review some poems of mine. Thx!


    10 months ago
  • rainandsonder

    thx so much for this! i’d appreciate reviews on “fragments of flashes of vignettes” and “like the dark has opened its maw and now i can see its teeth”


    11 months ago
  • Juliana

    This is so kind of you! I can see you already have a ton of pieces, but if you have the time, I could really use some feedback on this piece.
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/126153/version/243843


    11 months ago
  • BurningMidnightOil

    @parachutes,
    Thank you for offering to review our pieces. Im sure it means the world to everyone who takes you up on your offer. Would you mind reviewing the pieces listed below? Thank you:)
    “The Chevalier”
    “Elskede en av Havet”


    11 months ago
  • Anha

    actually, on second thought, if you could review "i think i met god on a bench at st james' park" and "i feel like an old god walking among new men." that would be fantastic.

    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/125341/version/241086
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/124394/version/238708


    11 months ago
  • pineapples

    it would be AWESOME if you could review two of my pieces: "My Pencils All Broke, So I'm Converting To Mechanicalism" and "You Learn Something New Every Day"


    11 months ago
  • New York_dreamer

    I posted four songs that I would love to get feedback on, "Vibes", "Back Down", "Jealousy", and "Waterproof" that would be so helpful. Thank you for doing this! :)

    Also, HUGE shoutout to you for being my 50th follower! You received a shoutout on my thank you post! Go check it out! :)


    11 months ago
  • Anha

    it would be nice to get reviews but i don't really have a need for any particular piece just yet. if you'd like to give me feedback on a piece of your choosing, that would be nice, but i might wait till i have something worth reviewing. thanks for doing this!


    11 months ago
  • mason wong

    And also thank you so much!!!!!


    11 months ago
  • mason wong

    Can you review?
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/126677/version/243732
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/126675/version/243729
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/111755/version/212749
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/111753/version/212747
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/111760/version/212758
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/114163/version/217669
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/114654/version/218607
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/114382/version/218608


    11 months ago
  • hero2a11

    There's two pieces I want to try and figure out: The Odd-Eyed Man and Fimbulwinter. The first one has been revised a bit but I want to try and get feedback and iron out any bugs that may be left. The second one is unedited. You can take your pick on which one to read or do both if you want. Whatever you decide. Thanks!


    11 months ago