Peer Review by hoangmy (Viet Nam)()

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Autumn #sixlittlestories

By: Emzie


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Leaves are golden- autumn is here.

Rain falls quietly against my window

I cradle my tea, steam curling.

My eyes sparkle at autumn skies.

I wrap myself in my blanket.

I finish my book, tears falling.



 


Peer Review

I love how you describe the normal activities we would all do in such an autumn day!!!


I think you can elaborate more how the book makes you feel touched or how the autumn has a special place in your place. Ah i dont really know hehehehe it is just a personal view


Reviewer Comments

I love how it makes readers feel relatable cuz i love autumn so much!!!