Peer Review by Soph_thewriter (United States)

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By: the bubbling pen

It was not a subtle wringing-of-hands, but an inextricably consuming disease, engulfing its victim with a language of grief so archetypal of human nature that one was not only overcome by it, but warped into the flesh of its intense sorrow.

Message to Readers

keep your chin up xx

Peer Review

Grief certainly does consume me at times, which leads to anxiety and stress about the future. With a friend of family member, though, it becomes bearable. Thank you for reminding me f that :)

Reviewer Comments

Great piece. Could definitely be expanded upon.