Cornflower Burst

United States

Writer: a form of magician that turns words into worlds.
Often can be found seeking solace in libraries (see magical institutes)

Message to Readers

I wrote this piece to show how I felt while I was waiting to get results for the Flash Fiction Competition. Any feedback on the rhythm, word choice, or rhyme is highly appreciated. Even a comment works. So, please, don't just like, comment about your feedback. Or review. I'd be willing to do the same for you. I hope you enjoy my writing!

She Waits

August 30, 2019

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She waits
Dry eyes,
wanting to cry.
Dry lips,
wanting to scream.
Anticipation burns.
She waits.

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7 Comments
  • Cornflower Burst

    But still no results, and it's driving me absolutely crazy.


    over 1 year ago
  • Cornflower Burst

    I've been waiting for eveeeer (AKA 11 and a half hours).


    over 1 year ago
  • New York_dreamer

    And OMG they are announcing the winners today!!! *Freaks out*


    over 1 year ago
  • New York_dreamer

    I love how you can take such a short piece and make the words sink deep! Beautiful writing my friend :) Keep it up!


    over 1 year ago
  • Cornflower Burst

    I think I'm going to die of anticipation.


    over 1 year ago
  • Cornflower Burst

    When will the results ever come out?!


    over 1 year ago
  • Cxtrus

    I'm waiting to, I am so nervous.


    over 1 year ago