Peer Review by Kenneth Keng (United States)

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One-Liners of Doom

By: Cornflower Burst


PROMPT: One-Liner

We are all but dreams floating in a sky of hope, we will all perish eventually but for now, we are the sweetest honey and water.

OR

Food and water my fill your stomach, but love and hate feed your soul.


Peer Review

They were both powerful thought provoking one-liners.


Reviewer Comments

Good job!