Peer Review by Jeremiah Boss (United States)

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One-Liners of Doom

By: Cornflower Burst


PROMPT: One-Liner

We are all but dreams floating in a sky of hope.


Message to Readers

Feedback from others is my middle name.


Peer Review

it has a lot of meaning because dreams are more than just little movies.


Reviewer Comments

i like this because i think that dreams are very important in peoples lives