See that girl kneeling next to the bookshelf in the library? She's whispering the book titles to herself. That's me. Back away slowly, and then run.
1. Is the dialogue good? Does it work? Is it realistic?
2. Does the piece flow? Is it awkward or clunky?
3. Did you find yourself getting bored at any point?
Written By: lizbadiz
August 27, 2019