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was really struggling on finding a title worthy of this piece. still struggling; if you think you have a good title idea, comment below.
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reviews very much appreciated
I don't even know where to begin. I had to read this a couple of times to understand it, but I think that applies to all the best stories. Just wow. I'm blown away. The way you take an innocent, overused line, and created a spectacular story from the hero's point of view is incredible.
I would love to know more about the hero's story, but not in this piece. Here there is just enough to understand what is going on, but you left enough hanging that it's mysterious.
This piece alone is earning you a follow. I think 'the honest hero' is enough for the title, the second part is kinda unnecessary and makes it long.