don't settle for the mundane;
chaos is far more intriguing.
been meaning to write this one for months now
finally got to it!
Written By: asteria
August 31, 2019
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You truly are a unique talent. Some’s artistry pours from paintbrushes, their singing, a pencil, etc. You, Astoria? Yours leaks from your fingertips in the form of word after ravishing word.
thank you! it really touches my heart to know you love my pieces so much & appreciate all the work i put into them :)
asteria - you have such a wonderful way with words. i love logging on to wtw to find another piece of yours published. your voice is so interesting, and my goodness you write beautifully. i just wanted to reach out to appreciate the work that i'm sure goes into these pieces - yours is one of the profiles i find myself scrolling through every once in a while (okay, maybe more than every once in a while).
Wow! truly gorgeous language!
thank you so much for the feedback! i love it!
@fatpanda, i've been super busy this summer with work & volunteering at stuff, & now classes have begun, & i'm trying to pound out a schedule right now. so maybe i'll be able to login to wtw more routinely again :)
where have you been? feedback-- evefything anha said, and given the fact that this idea has been on your mind for a while, the execution is simply beautiful. well done!
you seem to have quite a way with sea-salt imagery; speaking of "rotting shipwrecks", "the ocean's love for dead things" and that powerful last line, "wave after pounding wave of salted rage" implying humanity's influence on nature's wrath. simply lovely.
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