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The girl is a vibrant character, has a lot of life in her and is very inquisitive. This was how I interpreted it because I saw a lot of parallels to myself and that's how my boyfriend often describes me. The guy is grounded but humorous, responsible but fun to be around. These traits are contradictory but they complement each other and infused with the girl's big ideas and questions about the world, we have a dynamic couple with plenty of adventures.
I feel really happy and had that "awwwwwww" reaction that I do when I read or write romantic pieces. This story took a simple prompt and responded with an equally simple piece, yet it still has a nice atmosphere created from it.
I found your story enjoyable to read through, loving how you distinguished the two characters with italics and regular font. Your use of punctuation is well-thought out and when the story is read aloud, it indicates certain ways to speak the lines. This is an incredible tool, punctuation, that you have been able to utilised and I hope you further choose to manipulate with when you write. My only advice would be to revise simple things that I have highlighted but otherwise, a flawless piece with each character having a unique tone and personality. Please continue writing for WTW and producing pieces like this!