New York_dreamer

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who, me? i'm just your average wild dreamer
"the more chaos reveals himself, the better my pen flows across my paper"
"love is love; sort of indescribable... you'll know it when you feel it"

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Shaded Glass #raincontest

August 31, 2019

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i gaze into the glass and see
a person staring back at me

i scan this person's soul and guess
what image that i'll see next

i watch as shadows begin to shift
in the glass, the person drifts

the image darkens, fear is back
it's using glass to attack

i look in awe as this person's soul
is drooping; fate has taken toll

and as i stare into the glass
deception, lies have become mass

the person's soul is fading away
leaving hurt and no more hope today
 
We all get that feeling when we look in the mirror and not like what we see. Sometime, lies and "images" of this world will tear you down just by looking at glass. Remember, you are amazingly beautiful. No one can ever change that.

This is my entry for #raincontest, go check it out!

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4 Comments
  • The Bubbling Pen

    a strikingly beautiful piece that provokes a world of different emotions. fabulous xx


    7 months ago
  • New York_dreamer

    @and-peggy Haha! Don't feel pressured by my message lol thanks for letting me know what you think anyway! Always lucky to have you even bother to look at my work :)


    7 months ago
  • and-peggy

    Super good, your writing always makes me smile! I only commented because you told me to, I just liked everyone else's, so consider yourself lucky. Have a great day, and keep writing! ;)


    7 months ago
  • r|A|i|N

    such an interesting and powerfully stated concept. i loved your use of rhyming. this is a truly chilling and important poem.


    7 months ago