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Do you want to know more? Or is this kinda bland?
Idk, just trying out a new style.
The honest and the truthful self-description given by the character has greatly delighted and surprised me. This is a rare trait found in novel these days.
I am curious as to why you have mentioned that the character lives in a basement. Is that really her room? Or is something fishy going on here?
Hey friend! It is lovely to interact with you after so many months. I know I have been a jerk and etc and etc. Please forgive me I love this piece of yours and I virtually beg you to continue.