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I loved the repetitive motif of "when I was younger" and I enjoyed watching the evolution of your impressions of love even in such a short piece.
I'd love to read a piece that further dives into your experience. Where did you first form your impressions of love? Your parents? Movies? Once you got older, how did you start redefining your impressions of love? Maybe you could even describe 'that bedroom upstairs'.
Wow, wow, wow! I love this piece! It's simple, short, and full of wisdom beyond your years. Your writing is straight forward, without much flowering, and yet it is immersive. I hope you keep writing your stories, I hope you keep inviting readers to watch you grow.