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Okay, so where does this story take place? Because it’s giving me hardcore vibes of a psychiatric ward, which is the most screwy place in the world (I’ve been 5ere, so I get to say that lol). This piece is chilling, and heartbreaking.
I want more! This seems to be a common theme in my reviews, but for real, this can Ben so much bigger if you want it to be. I love it so much!
Excellent piece. Just fix the spelling mistake, consider what I’ve said, and please, PLEASE, add to this! I love it! Thanks for letting me review your piece!