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The title quite honestly I have trouble focusing so I was thinking maybe this person will reveal the secret to focus. I was mistaken.
The slight misdirection within the story. I thought aome intense test or something was going on.
Nope you are clear and concise:)
Get a friend to read this to you. Personally I hate doing this but it helps because you hear how someone else reads your work.
I really like this piece, it is something that I relate to 100% and I think you accurately described 80% of the writing process. Thank you for writing and good luck on the competition:)