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fourteen years

By: Maria Sorrentino's thoughts


PROMPT: [Insert Age]

fourteen years of trying to make sense 
fourteen years of making a mess 
fourteen years of hanging about 
fourteen years of figuring things out 
fourteen years of hearing songs 
fourteen years of playing along 
fourteen years of fearful noise 
fourteen years of crowded joy 


Peer Review

I think the strongest sentence is "fourteen years of figuring things out".


The layout of this essay is very nice and is relatable. I think that it was all working well together.


Reviewer Comments

I think this piece was very nice and explained the gist of being a 14 year old.