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Hope you enjoy!
I was glancing over some of the flash fiction published and the sentence "Her laugh was more addictive than any drug on the market" caught my eye and drew me in to read the entire thing
You did this when you described the girl the guy is obsessed with.
Nope, there was a clear beginning, middle, and end
THIS WAS GREAT KEEP IT UP! >W