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I really liked the title and the mention of the seasons.
I think this was done quite successfully, because I was left wanting to know more about this bystander; his life and his story. It was wonderful that in only a few words and without saying much at all you created this mysterious character, that for some reason I wanted to know all about.
One thing that left me somewhat confused was the fact that the man went from being totally uncaring and unsociable one season to careing th e next. (When he went to buy sweets for the children). But I dont know, that might be the point. A sudden transformation of character, perhaps? Could you please explain that?
I think you grasped the idea and whole concept of flash fiction very well. Honestly I think this is the best flash fiction piece I have ever read. Great work, keep going!