Elanor Mericle

United States of America

I'm young and crazy
Christ is my savior
I'm half VSCO girl lol
I love my friends and family
I have a sweet cat named Shamoo <3

Message to Readers

please be critical! i really honestly want to improve my writing. also, leaving a like would mean a ton <3


August 13, 2019

It starts as emptiness.

Then, pulling back darkness like a curtain...

A light. 

Starting as a faint pulse, just barely blinking through the darkness, it grows stronger, like invisible hands are pulling pieces of nothing and molding them into something. 
An unseen artist works the new vessel, pouring love into It like water.
A rhythm begins beating with the blinking light.

It lives. 

And it is wonderfully made.

But, oh, how quickly it can all be undone.
Dark, clumsy shadows dance across the light. A poison seeps into It, like smoke. 

The light wavers. 

Then, it goes dark.

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  • ThePaperSamurai

    This is so good! Poetic and imaginative, I am left hanging on every word, great job!!!! :)

    5 months ago
  • Elanor Mericle

    @K. Marie Christen thx so much!

    6 months ago
  • Sabine of the Galaxy

    I like this, I'm not quite sure what's happening, but I don't think I need to. Good job!

    6 months ago