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please be critical - it helps and im not sensitive, so say your opinion and don't mess around with pretty words lol. leaving a like would mean alot <3
The name was very cool. I also love this story.
The reason why the light was created and ended was very mysterious. I wish there was more hinting on why though.
No, I think the proccess was very well said based on the amount of words.
I really loved this piece. With some word this could turn into THE winning piece. (This is a joke because this is really weird and just suppossed to make you laugh.) What if this was turned into a wikipedia page. (Now I feel like you should make one. XD)
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