July 2019

Elanor Mericle

United States

I'm young and crazy
Christ is my savior
I'm half VSCO girl lol
I love my friends and family
I have a sweet cat named Shamoo <3
VIRGINIA TECH HOKIES 4EVER

Message to Readers

please be critical - it helps and im not sensitive, so say your opinion and don't mess around with pretty words lol. leaving a like would mean alot <3

Unborn

August 8, 2019

It starts as emptiness.

Then, under darkness, something begins.

A light. 

Starting as a faint pulse, just barely blinking through the nothingness, it grows stronger, like invisible hands are pulling pieces of nothing and molding them into something. 
An unseen artist works the new vessel, pouring love into It like water.
A rhythm begins beating with the blinking light.

It lives. 

And it is wonderfully made. 

But, someone has already made their choice.
Dark, clumsy shadows dance across the light. A poison seeps into It, like smoke. 

It doesn't take long. 
The light wavers. 

Then, it goes dark.

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7 Comments
  • Just A Dream

    @Elanor Mericle
    Why, thank you!


    11 days ago
  • Elanor Mericle

    @Just A Dream thx a million! that means a lot coming from such a talented writer such as youreslf ;)


    11 days ago
  • Just A Dream

    An absolutely fantastic, gorgeous piece! I think you have quite a good chance of winning!


    11 days ago
  • Elanor Mericle

    @EAurora thx! <3


    12 days ago
  • EAurora

    Beautiful! I love this


    13 days ago
  • Elanor Mericle

    @DaBolo thx a mil!


    14 days ago
  • DaBolo

    I really loved this piece. Nice job.

    P.S. I sent in a review.


    15 days ago