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Message to Readers
In schools across the nation, the hot topics of the Civil Rights Movement are highlighted. We all know Dr. King, Rosa Parks, and the Emmett Till. We've all heard of The March on Washington, the Montgomery Bus Boycott, and Bloody Sunday. This, dear reader, is the story of lesser-known heroes in the Civil Rights Movement. Their actions forged the path for generations to follow. This is a thank you and an argument to help them.
I liked the way it started. It was very descriptive in terms as what happened before hand, making it easy to visualise it.
I actually don't know anything about the Port Chicago Mutiny so I'd really like to learn more about it. It sounds really interesting and I think your writing captures that well.
I hope you write more!!