Fatima M


aspiring writer, proud ravenclaw.

Message to Readers

I'd like anything that'll help me improve my piece, thanks!


August 8, 2019

Under the stars, she holds my hand as I rest against the open window.
" Do you love me?" I ask, tears rolling down my cheeks.
She avoids my eyes, looking everywhere but at me.
Slowly, she takes her hand out of mine and uses both hands to push at my shoulders, hard.
I'm falling now. I reach out for her hand, she does the same. Our fingertips touch, a quick kiss before gravity pulls on me, hard. 
Eyes emotionless, she looks down at me:" I did." 
As I fall, I think: I fell for her again, hard.

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  • Fatima M

    thank you so much @Emma16

    about 1 year ago
  • Emma16

    I love the wordplay between the girl pushing him and making him fall, and him falling in love.

    about 1 year ago