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Hello there, I am back! This is my first flash fiction, so any feedback is welcome.
Please tell me what you think, and take time to review.
The title really lured me in. I have a lot of questions now, but thats good. One of which is... Did the letter ever get to John Bates? I mean it is called A Lost Letter.
The launguage made me really want to translate it. Can it even be translated? Was it just gibberish? I think it means All shall die at (terug) (gee) and die Netherlands or Ella Sal the cat intrudes the and the Netherlands?! Nice job on the launguage. Its really mysterious and thats what a Flash Fiction is.
I had trouble finding any confusing spots. Nice job. :)
I really loved this piece. You understand what a flash fiction is really about so great job. I can't wait to read more of your work.