Peer Review by jasmine_aurora (United Kingdom)

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By: she’s-got-a-story



Martin from French IV stands like a stalactite. Why are we on the ceiling of my old bedroom? The last time I saw him or that house was sophomore year, but we're together, upside-down. Just left of the ceiling fan. 
"Are you St. Peter?" 
"I'm afraid of heights."
This isn't height; it's descent into madness, I'm sure. Soon the room will start to melt upwards, and I will wake in sterility sans Martin. Unless those purple-curtained windows really are the Gates. 
"Martin, if I jump out, will I fall up or down?"
"Down, into the sky."


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I absolutely love this! It feels like a very surrealistic take on the prompt and stands out from the other entries.


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I didn't quite understand everything, but I'm assuming that's partially the point so I feel the question isn't relevant?


Really just incredible- I know this isn't the most helpful review but I'm sure you'll write great things.


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