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From the opening, this grabbed my interest. The curious way in which it is written is intriguing!
In pretty much every line. It's almost as though I know less the more I read but in a good way!
Everywhere but not in a bad way. I was confused in an interested, happy way. I enjoyed the confusion, it ended leaving me reading it again and again as it seems almost chaotic !
This is a really interesting writing style, keep up the amazing work!
Really fun piece that's written really well!