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By the first sentence you’re already introduced into this calm nature filled environment, and it’s followed up by impressive amounts of figurative language that draws you in deeper and deeper into this silent forest.
Why is this forest so silent? Is there any immediate reaction to the breaking of this silence? The writer keeps the reader questioning multiple times successfully throughout the writing.
Maybe more into depth on why this forest is so silent, unless their is a intentional reason for this then everything is said.
You have a great story going for you, best of luck!
Your use of figurative language is great, it really adds to the scene.