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Title! Really nice!
"he's friends with the one living in my closet" smoothly introduces the character's imagination as well as the setting.
There were no parts where I didn't understand what was happening, although I do wonder if the monsters are friendly or if the child is scared of them. That isn't necessarily a bad thing to leave ambiguous though!
Keep on writing! You have created an excellent story in under 99 words!