Just A Dream

United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland

I’m an accidental overuser of commas, parentheses, and bold typeface.
I’m the biggest classic rock fan you’ll ever meet.
I’m a lover, not a fighter.

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A dream is when when your brain spills a box of thoughts. When you forget the dream, your brain’s cleaned the mess up.

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Two Boys

August 2, 2019

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I spy
with my little eye
two boys 
who walk the streets at night
curly headed, starry eyed

They could be brothers
but their songs sound different
and when one note rises
the other falls

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1 Comment
  • The Bubbling Pen

    Short but beautifully lyrical - I love the use of musical imagery xx


    4 months ago