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I don't really see any metaphors aside from the line "how mystical of her?" in the first stanza which expresses devotion and awe.
You could stretch this by elaborating how the moon is a beauty that is out of reach, something too ethereal to be touched? You could also compare the moon to a person?
I like how this poem expresses how ethereal the moon is.