Peer Review by Victoria Martin (Canada)

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0-9 Life

By: pj_daughter_of_athena


0, the number of secrets I have told.

1, the number of people I trust.

2, the number of siblings I love and have that I never want to lose. 

3, the number of angels I have lost.

4, the age when I learned to dream.

5, the number of dreams I wish could be reality. 

6, the age diabetes named itself apart of me.

7, the numberless times I've wanted to talk but decided it's best to help myself.

8, the age I found Harry Potter and years later I have learned the many stories inside that make me except me.

9, the age when life was simpler.

Peer Review

I think the numbers really compliment the stark and frankness of the piece. It simple but moving.

I would say you could add the amount of lines of description for the amount of each line but honestly I like your conciseness.

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