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United Arab Emirates

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far too nonchalant about things i should probably care about

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reviews pLeAsE. reviews without anything constructive are honestly a waste of your time, more than anything. be harsh or whatever when you critique me, but please do.

as for comments, they help a lot lol so if you drop a few, it would be highly appreciated.

of mundane tales

September 11, 2019

FREE WRITING

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my teeth feel like nails hammered into a freshly painted wall; white dripping, my tongue stuck to the roof, boarded-up windows, and my neighbor saying goodbye.
my dentist says i put up with too much pain; this tall, dark, stocky man with his competent fingers and twenty seven years of peering into tired mouths. he says i think too much and say too little, but there is only so much i can say with my mouth harboring a fugitive; gums, cookie cutters and a sweet tooth.
oh so well, the sun is beating down this little clinic, an exhausted a.c. and the trio of nurses who smile only till their lips, i wonder, wonder, wonder; do they get free dental checkups?
to love is to feed, and so we stay starving, me and my incomprehensible teeth.
i was trying to be more descriptive with my prose, could you tell lmao

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2 Comments
  • K.R.M

    Very interesting.


    6 months ago
  • Anha

    i can tell! this is breathtaking, no pun intended.


    6 months ago