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When Someone Told Her

By: Caitlin Kemker

PROMPT: Quartet

When someone told her to climb a tree, she picked the tallest in the whole forest.
When they told her she would fall, she dangled from her legs and laughed.
When they told her she was stupid, she recited the periodic table.
When they told her to come back down, she leapt from the branches and learned how to fly.

Peer Review

Each line gave us more and more information about the character.

I would like to see a story about this carefree and courageous girl

Reviewer Comments

beautiful piece of writing