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Message to Readers
tried to write an epilogue of sorts for the witches piece, but it turned into something completely new. tell me what you think, and whether you'd like to see more piece like this.
i was absolutely delighted by how gorgeously written this piece is. i've always had a thing for space, and the way you captured its beauty here is part of what makes this piece so enticing.
the ending, i think, was the only place where i was confused; the thing about astronomers seemed to come out of nowhere. but like i said, it's up to you whether you want to clarify that or not. i think that even if you were to clarify it, some of the ambiguity would have to remain. as i said in one of my highlights, i think that some further elaboration about the runes would also add to the piece.
this review was particularly hard for me to write, honestly, because there was so little criticism i had and so much praise, i felt like the praise would get repetitive. honestly, i could just highlight this whole piece; it's so masterfully written and woven with such beauty and care. i adore the way you carve out your characters, the way you reel us into this world of goddesses and stars. most of the criticism i did put here are just suggestions or minor tweaks; you could change nothing about this piece and it would still be a fantastic read. sorry if this was lacking in criticism; i love the way you tell stories and i love this piece!