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tried to write an epilogue of sorts for the witches piece, but it turned into something completely new. tell me what you think, and whether you'd like to see more piece like this.
wow. the way you wrote this is exemplary, i adore your writing. you use such pristine words and write them in such a way as if you are sewing an intricate tapestry. wow.
i got a little confused when you started talking about astronomers, who are they and what do they have to do with the story. that is the only thing missing from this piece.
i took me a week to ponder on some constructive feedback, as soon as i saw this piece i was going to comment, but i had no constructive feedback, but i had none. when you asked me to review i was searching for all the other pieces you wrote, but i really like this piece, so here i am. i hope you don't mind i only gave one tip for this piece. good luck on the rest of your writing!!