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Can't wait for October :D
I found the names, suspenseful plot line, and inklings of character development surprising in a piece this short. In very few words, you managed to make me fear for Roban. Fear for what, you might ask? I’m not sure. The fact that I’m not sure THRILLS me.
Consider maybe taking the time to flashback to the unpleasant meeting that Roban thinks of in the Great Hall. Other than that great work.
I’ll be on the look out for any Led Zeppelin fans writing novels! This seems like it could turn into something worth reading and rereading time and time again