Harlow

United States

A human that does stuff with words among other humans who do other stuff with words

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Message to Readers

i dont like my little voice

Little Voice

July 19, 2019

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There's this voice
in my head
that's monstrous.

Always pointing out 
my flaws,
my mistakes,
my wrongs.

And that voice is 
so loud
and I yell trying 
to force it out.

A futile attempt,
it says.
And all at once, I realize
that the voice in my head
is mine.

Help me.
 

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2 Comments
  • almost flora kane

    (On the same track as your comment on my piece...) Best ending ever: help me.
    I can sincerely say that this piece is so darn relatable that I was sucked into this poem immediately:P
    Plus, you have no idea what your comment meant to me:D Thank you!


    over 1 year ago
  • asteria

    great poem! i like that the last line leaves so much desperation. (also, futile is good word choice)


    over 1 year ago