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One of the biggest things was probably the descriptive voice of the narrator, showing every detail in such a vivid and perfect way that the surroundings came to life!
A little aside the question, but what the main character doing there? Was it just to see the goods the traders were bringing in? To catch a glimpse of the beauty? To see the slaves? Another reason?
I believe your story is strong, and that it doesn't need anything added. I liked having that question run through while I was reading. It made me feel closer to the character.
In the section above I had a question pondering why the character was near the docks, but other than that, I think your idea and story are brilliant!
Gorgeous story, filled to the brim with emotion of the salves and the sadness therein, the wonder and beauty of the exotic merchandise, and with a beautiful language and way of writing that I adore!
I absolutely love your piece and everything in it!
Keep writing! I can't wait to read more from the future of your skill!