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Cosmic Sneeze

March 18, 2015

PROMPT: Countdown


    She began to wonder if God made her by mistake.

    Perhaps He sneezed, breathing life into dust on accident.

    Or maybe He had a little leftover clay?

    That would explain why she was purposeless.

    Her life was an unfinished sentence.

    There was nothing--no period.

    Not even a comma.

    Just blank space.

    White space.



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  • AlexaS

    Slightly depressing, haha, but I like this! Your writing flows well, and the piece is very deep and relatable. Though I don't believe God creates anyone by mistake :)

    almost 4 years ago